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by Daniel E. Blackston

Two Crow Poems

12/13/2021

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Picture
          ​The crow drank its fill
          from the snow’s melted puddle,
          sprayed rainbows flying away.

         The crow drank its fill
         from a puddle of snow,
         sprayed rainbows flying.

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  • Blackston Bio
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  • Sylvia Plath’s Ariel
  • Sylvia Plath's "Blackberrying"
  • Non-Local Consciousness
  • Self-Identity
  • ​Concerning Kandinsky
  • Being and Knowing
  • Existential Metaphors
  • Submit a Poem